Alana pencil

I'm reading Saga at the moment. It's amazing! There was this one pose of Alana I really wanted to draw because of the action and energy in it. I...fell short. I need to push the posing a lot more. I think because I rarely draw in a comic book style, I was more concerned with getting the fold lines and patches of shading down. I was more concerned about the details than the overall form, and it looks a little limp in comparison because of it.

I'm still quite happy with it though